Whoo, three tries and I finally get the right edited version up, now with indents! I so did not understand what I was doing there. Anyway, reworking chapters, trying to add a bit more that I left out the first draft of what I have. I hope to have the second chapter up in a few days. Buuuuuut, it will probably take longer. Hopefully my brain has decided not to bestow another blessing upon me with the burden of writers block. Here's hoping!